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Ep. 18, Page 6
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Comic 1202 - Ep. 18, Page 6

17th Nov 2012, 5:41 AM in Episode 18 :: Save My Place | Load My Place
Average Rating: 5 (3 votes)

Author Notes:

smbhax 17th Nov 2012, 5:41 AM edit delete
smbhax
Saturn and three moons: Enceladus is on the left, Tethys on the right, and Pandora is a teeny weeny little dot just above the rings on the far left.



Today's page was originally brighter:



But it didn't quite seem to match the shadowy drama idea I'd had in my head, so I picked it back up and cracked open another ink bottle.

Comments:

gary cramer 17th Nov 2012, 6:02 AM edit delete reply
gary cramer
Ben , the original looks more like something that would be colored, the final one is much stronger on the visual side.
smbhax 17th Nov 2012, 12:40 PM edit delete reply
smbhax
Interesting point! I think also I get mentally stuck on just making something "pretty," rather than giving it the heavy treatment the scene might call for.
moizmad 17th Nov 2012, 11:03 AM edit delete reply
moizmad
Well I think the second one begs for colour gary, if I had the time, I'd take a crack at it.
smbhax 17th Nov 2012, 12:39 PM edit delete reply
smbhax
Ooh!
cattservant 20th Nov 2012, 1:55 AM edit delete reply
cattservant
And that's mistake # 2.
smbhax 20th Nov 2012, 2:39 PM edit delete reply
smbhax
Poor guy just can't do anything right!