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Ep. 21, Page 58
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Comic 1563 - Ep. 21, Page 58

22nd Feb 2014, 1:13 PM in Episode 21 :: Save My Place | Load My Place
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)

Author Notes:

smbhax 22nd Feb 2014, 1:13 PM edit delete
After several days of working all day on a watercolor A* page only to decide its awful and then make myself generate a second page late at night, I'm apparently so paranoid that I'll do a perfectly decent page, decide it's awful, do another page, and then, bleary-eyed, realize that oh, the first one was okay, just needed to straighten the nose and add some of the usual white ink touch-ups here and there. >_> So I went with that one, but that leaves me with a superfluous alternate version of the page--so I've put it up on eBay along with the past week's regular pages; the auction of the alternate version is here. Here's a preview:


Did I go with the right version? : o


cattservant 22nd Feb 2014, 1:18 PM edit delete reply
Think so,
She looks more angry than thoughtful in the secondary.
smbhax 23rd Feb 2014, 12:34 AM edit delete reply
Ah, that there is an excellent point~!
moizmad 23rd Feb 2014, 10:44 AM edit delete reply
Great colour work. One small point Ben, her nose is very manly looking there, gals usually have smaller nose bones.
smbhax 23rd Feb 2014, 5:05 PM edit delete reply
Yeah it isn't even straight, either. : P And her head is man-sized, not woman-sized...which I do *all* the time yet still have trouble spotting it, garhgh.