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Ep. 10, Page 130
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Comic 509 - Ep. 10, Page 130

29th Sep 2010, 6:45 PM in Episode 10 :: Save My Place | Load My Place
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Guest 29th Sep 2010, 11:20 PM edit delete reply
Don't know why she hesitated, but if you snooze, you lose! You're so prolific, I hope to grow up to be like you.
Robotwin.com 29th Sep 2010, 11:27 PM edit delete reply
Robotwin.com
Oops, 'twas I. You also crossed the so called 'line of action,' but the storytelling is clear as a bell. I like how the light source is still coming from the window.
smbhax 30th Sep 2010, 12:14 PM edit delete reply
smbhax
I crossed the line of action? :o Is that bad? I don't know what it means aaaaaa

She wasn't *supposed* to have hesitated so much as to have been distracted by the impact of the three missiles on the surface above; so she looks back at him in the previous panel, but that's supposed to be (if I was better at showing action :D) *right* before he smacks into her.